He was murdered in the dawn of 1983. Shot; dead. The killer makes his escape.
There's my solid lead. It's the one that comes straight out (generically) and tells what happened. Since it is generic, it will make the reader want to read on. Just by that sentence, you cannot know that the person' s name was Bob or that he was 87 years old and runs a cosmetic company. No. You would have to read on to find out.
Well, Buhbye!!!
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